windows

so much joy so much light

windows

predawn awakening

faint hint of renewed light

silent whisper of another beginning

blinds filter

the newest dawn

from this fortress

opened one after another

the blinds

now allow vision

there is freshness

there is energy

there is life once again

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Welcome back Keith! Love the profound and celebratory poem and the idea of windows both protecting and opening oneself to light. "There is freshness..there is energy..there is life once again"- stunning line. I feel your joy and am so thrilled for you! Kudos!

[Write Cat]

I just love mornings. It makes me feel so fresh!!!! Your poem is deeply valuable!!

[ABG 2.0]

there is something special within each new dawn ...
thanks for taking time to read and make comment

[Write Cat]

Pleasure!!

[U.C. Lastcall]

Damn fine writing here truly some great lines .
And just a hell of a write .

Keep posting cheers .

[ABG 2.0]

cheers right back at ya
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