To my friend

I'm sorry friend.

I didn't mean for it

To come to this.

 

You have been at my side

You have taught me what I know

And yet I rejected you,

So bluntly out in the open

Because I didn't like a part of you.

 

You looked so terrified

When I let out a secret,

about you.

You were close to tears,

while I was laughing it off.

 

You had the look of disappointment

On your face,

With tears coming from your eyes.

 

You silently walked away,

with laughter and shrieks

surrounding you.

 

Then I realized what I have done.

 

I regret it now.

You are worth more

than these petty friends that I have now.

 

What will it take to get you back?

 

Author's Note

I need feed back please :D

Reviews

[Mazie Tackett]

emotional sweet its good

[deepblue04]

Actually no, it comes to me. I think of the scenario and it comes from there.

[Tai Ryens]

You've written a poem stuffed with regret and sadness. Is this currently happening right now? Because all of your emotions spoken sound like reality. Well done.

[RachelReaper]

The regretful tone throughout the poem shows that you are really being sincere and I think that is the best part. The emotion sounds real.