Drifting log

Drifting log

A Poem by Ankit Mahar
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A poem which tell us not to go wherever the crowd take us .Instead make our own way . This poem ask us to not be like a log which drifts wherever the flow of the river takes it .

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Don't go with the flow .
It may not be right .
Do what you want to do ,
Even if for that you have to fight .

Got to believe in yourself ,
with your chest ,hold your belief tight .
The path will be but thorns
& there might not be any light .

Say no to what's not you .
Learn to leave the harbour's sight .
It's never sure you'll win ,
But don't lose the hope and fight .

Because even if there's no help and light .
You've got to make your way through the fog .
Go against the forces holding you back .
& never be in the river like a drifting log .

© 2013 Ankit Mahar


Author's Note

Ankit Mahar
I have tried make this poem inspirational . Please send yoir reviews if it is so or not .
If no, then kindly tell how I can do so , so that it may help when I will write the next one .

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That's some skill you exhibited in this piece, making the rhyming lines but keeping the message intact. Nice one Ankit.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ankit Mahar

10 Years Ago

Thanks brother .
Noeldeeptz

10 Years Ago

You welcome
Go against the forces holding you back .
& never be in the river like a drifting log .

Great closer to a fantastic piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ankit Mahar

10 Years Ago

Thanks Pryde for reviewing .
cool rhyme and a nice message......This one IS Inspirational and guides you what paths to chose in life........Refreshing indeed

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ankit Mahar

10 Years Ago

Thanks bro for your kind reviews .Keep innovating .
Follow your own dreams, believe in yourself without fear of being who you are - in that, you will find happiness and success instead of just being one of the crowd!
The path may be difficult but forge on..........great words of inspiration for us to follow!! If we are strong we shall succeed!!
A wonderful poem of inspiration!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ankit Mahar

10 Years Ago

Thanks sheila
Ankit Mahar

10 Years Ago

Thanks sheila
Yes indeed Ankit, your poem is a great inspiration and a joy to read!

The ideology of the poem is a very worthy one, believe in yourself and your convictions, all to easy to just to follow the path that everyone else is travelling, but it's better to make your own way!

Splendid, keep writing friend you have talent !!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ankit Mahar

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot brother .You have encouraged me a lot .
So much wisdom and inspiration in this write. I like the metaphor about us being drifting logs...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ankit Mahar

10 Years Ago

I am glad that you like it brother .thanks for you review .Keep writing.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

I did. You are welcome...I will...:)

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Pithoragarh, India



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