Forest Road

Beautiful road went deep into the woods

Through the mountains and over the brooks 

Trees kept a watch over it 

Making sun hard to get to it.

Very few travel the length of it 

Without leaving their heart in the midst

Walking through was not very easy

Cos thought of the end made them crazy.

Coldness faded towards the end 

with the approaching open land 

With no trees to keep watch no more

the road tumbled more and more. 

Reviews

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

u deserve a better platform dude!!! nice one!!!

[Wolf]

While I was reading your poem I remembered every walk of mine with my friends in the woods, how we loved the atmosphere, the song of the birds... and we are always sad when we arrive back in the city...such a beautiful place are the woods with it's roads that can show you unlimited wonders!
Can't wait to read more :)