A wish left Untrue

A wish left Untrue

A Poem by Annabellious
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Depressing poem, Basically me.

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She lifts up that little blade,

To cut away her fears,

Hoping for the pain to fade,

The sorrow from all the years,

She wants to tell a story,

She forms it on her wrists,

Its such a deep and dark picture,

But still she cant resist,

She hopes for a better future,

All happiness and bliss,

But that is all a day dream,

A hopeless little wish.


© 2012 Annabellious



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Annabellious
This reminds me so much of myself. A wish that doesn't come true <3

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Difficult and depressing times shall not last. Sad poem but beautifully written! Love the usage of rhymes and the seamless flow. Short and full of meaning. I like the opening lines...the little blade and cutting away the fears.

Good job...keep them coming!:)

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It's good. I can feel the emotions you put into the poem while you were writing.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Difficult and depressing times shall not last. Sad poem but beautifully written! Love the usage of rhymes and the seamless flow. Short and full of meaning. I like the opening lines...the little blade and cutting away the fears.

Good job...keep them coming!:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Pax
such depressing poem. its a nice way to release your depression into poetry..keep it up

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Added on June 18, 2012
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Tags: sad, depression, depressing, depressed, suicide, suicidal, self harm, cut, cutting, emo

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Annabellious
Annabellious

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia



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Hi, I'm Annabell, I am 14 in 1 month. Writing takes my mind off things that are happening in my life. I couldn't live without music and I wouldn't be here if it wasn't for BVB (Black Veil Brides) and .. more..

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