A Poem by Carly

Starting to feel more like myself

Yet I haven't fixed the problems

There's no answer to the questions

And no reasons for the excuses

Can't improve what's broken

Not when there's no way out

I relied on you

Since I thought you'd care


I didn't think you were like this

That'd you'd stab me in the back again

I trusted that you'd be honest

I may have been wrong all along


Some things are better left unsaid

When they just made us this way

With nothing left but betrayal

We don't know how to get through

There's no reasons to the mistakes

Wish I knew how to make things better

I'm a mistake by false hope

My effort is nothing to you

Fighting was always questionable

Always tried not to bother 

Yet something always made it happen

Like we couldn't just talk it through

Why have I always been the mistake?

And why did I try too hard?

When there was no one there to care

I just wanted something to happen 

That wasn't meant to



You swore this wouldn't happen but look at us now. . .

© 2016 Carly

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ohhh my dear....
this is heart rending now...
you have all that my heart wanted to say for long...
often, I get questions which are left unanswered... confusions... puzzles, unsolved....
oh!!!! u just took away my words...
I am surprised reading....
recently, happened with me....something of this type...
even a single moment can being destruction...
anyway, have hope...
may all get better for u.... : )
Ani : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

Thanks again! I am glad you found this relatable, mostly why I set out to share my writing :) Thanks.. read more
Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

you're welcome...
there's a friend in need of your reviews, pokolgep... view his writings... .. read more

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