Paradise (4-liner)

I missed your adore, I missed your smile

I missed the love, in your eyes

For when you’re gone, I missed your presence

I missed your love, my paradise <3<3<3 

Reviews

[Gaurav Walia]

AMAZING rhyme..I love this piece...

[Anusha Prabhu]

Thank you Gaurav... I'm still waiting for your Kavitas..!!

[Gaurav Walia]

give me an hour more...actually they are written in some other non-convertible format so i am writing them again...just need a li'l more time...

[Anusha Prabhu]

Oh sure! Take your time... No hurry...!! :)

[cevance]

Once again-this is another enjoyable poem. Nice flow.

[Just Kim]

very nice, like the flow and rhyme