Forever and Ever

Lyrics and poems that never rhyme
Counting ways to pass the time
The seconds it seem
When you are away
They pass so slowly
They seem like days
I want you here
By my side
Don't wash away like the tide
I need you now more than ever
Echo the words Forever and Ever

Reviews

[Jeff]

Nicely written with lots of emotion.

[Akshat♥]

nicely written piece..
all this happens in love...
we need the person close to us every time :)
i personally feel you can add more in this write..
Keep writing!!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

The yearn for love to return to an empty heart. Excellent read and write.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

It was very simple, yet subtle and poignant. Although it lacked in depth a little according to me :)

[Anusha Prabhu]

Yes I totally understand. It lacked the feelings cuz' I didn't write it with feeling cuz' i have no clue what love feels like. I somehow wanted to write a piece on love. Tried to work this out.. Sorry for the flaws. :(

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Uhm. I'm sorry, I never wanted to pass a personal comment. Apologies, if caused any personal turmoil.

[Anusha Prabhu]

Of course u didn't. I knew it lacked feelings. In fact, it's great to have people who would correct you rather than just tell how good you are. Complementing takes talent nowhere. Advising improvises talent. Thank you.. :)

[Bhavya Kaushik]

:)

[Gaurav Walia]

Kudos!...I love it... :D

[Anusha Prabhu]

Thankyou

[Gaurav Walia]

Ur welcome :)

[cevance]

Nicely written, with a good flow.