smoke scenes

burning sketches lifting
like smoke in the sky
crying our names
to be heard they will cry
to be seen and be reached
many souls all below
burning and lifting
the space yet still grows
drifting up further
away from their goal
fading more quickly
up more and so slow
the travel is lonely
the souls cannot hear
seeing smoke signals
which they all just fear

Author's Note

riddle me this

Reviews

[Huggy Bear]

Fire is another natural force that shows the danger and beauty of life. Good Job as usual:)