Oh skies- Beautiful portrayer

wrote this poem on a beautiful brightly clouded noon.Hope you all understand, how i relate myself with the skies of different seasons.Thank you.

Oh Skies ,bright and elegant;
how thou instill serenity and hope in this quivered mind.
Lined by infinity,smothered with delightful moods,
thou stand high,
drawing a path to effervescence.

Oh Skies disquiet and dread,
lighting and thundering,
down pouring, letting it flow from your bosom.

Oh Skies mystic and ecstatic,
opulent with perspicacity:
shining with the shine conceived through every season that thou passeth

Oh Skies of wonders, how thou portray this soul so absolute!!

Oh Skies painted with a tint of pink thither,
smeared with orange hither,brushed with red far and wide;
how beautifully thou recapture the memories.

Author's Note

Ignore not anything,i pleadeth!

Reviews

[the_stoic]

i am always struck by the way a look at the sky calms down my frayed nerves .. brilliantly portrayed i must say ! it was a joy to read this !!

[anxia]

Ikr?
Aww thank you so much for your lovely comment, the_stoic!! I am glad you liked it.

[Rhianne Ney]

I love how it's written
Keep it up!

[anxia]

Thanks Rhi :)

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[SHEEMA HUQ]

indeedeth! I can hear this one being read with vigour, well done!

[anxia]

Thank you,Sheema:)

[brianna vega]

great job love.

[anxia]

Thank you,Brianna :).

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

written in the old language, I adore this.

[anxia]

AW thank you so much,Neva.I am so happy that you adore it:).Thank you so much for your adorable review!!!

[Sami Khalil]

Nice poem.

[anxia]

Thank you,Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Quite welcome

[Lizbeth]

What powerful imagery in this poem: the last stanza is my favourite!
Such colourful images come to mind with each description, and it's true, the skies are ever changing. Had to look up perspicacity :)
Enjoyed this poem the most of ones posted thus far.
Thank you for sharing
Lizbeth

[anxia]

Aw Liz,i am glad you liked it that much!!Thank you for you awesome review.And its my pleasure :)

[Lizbeth]

My pleasure ...
We're having a strange spectrum of colours here every single day!
Keep writing!
Liz

[EileenMarie]

Breatifully done! Nice write!

[anxia]

Thank you,Elleen.
:)

[Jai Garg]

I think you should write for your joy; so others can enjoy what you write.

[Jai Garg]

Maybe in time you will become conscious of why I commented like this; got to look within you lol.