Too blind to see

Too blind to see

A Poem by LittleBigDreams
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I wrote a little something

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I cared about you
And you to me
But you were just too blind to see
The person of your dreams could've been me

You fell for him
How I fell for you
I felt there was nothing
Left for me to do

He hurt you bad
You came running to me
You were just too blind to see

I really cared but I moved on
But you still cared about me
You were just too blind to see
That there could've been something between you and me

© 2018 LittleBigDreams


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LittleBigDreams
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To me, the best part of your story is when the narrator says "no thanks!" So many times I've seen this scene & you paint it in words so simple & true. It's never a good idea to settle for second fiddle. Good job with poetic construction & crafting rhyme to deliver this well-told story of emancipation -- freedom from pining over someone who really doesn't care that much about you! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


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To me, the best part of your story is when the narrator says "no thanks!" So many times I've seen this scene & you paint it in words so simple & true. It's never a good idea to settle for second fiddle. Good job with poetic construction & crafting rhyme to deliver this well-told story of emancipation -- freedom from pining over someone who really doesn't care that much about you! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unrequited love. Loving someone who can not return the love you give. A universal theme that many will relate to. Nicely composed.

Chris Shaw

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 17, 2018
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LittleBigDreams
LittleBigDreams

Kingsville, TX



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