12:oo MN

12:oo MN

A Poem by Aprille
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Just a bunch of words that hit my mind before a night's sleep.

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There’s the moon

Bright as it seems

With its ray,

Touching my face

At the middle of the night

While I gather my tears.


© 2014 Aprille



Author's Note

Aprille
Hello there. :) This is my first poem on this site, hope you like it. :)

P.S. I actually wrote 12:oo mn last November 2013.

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Lovely poem, short yet it tells much, I love how you describe this emotion of sadness with a setting. Great write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


The ending was unexpected but.....it did impact me! Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Strong description create vision of a sad and a lonely place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thanks. :)
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Love it! It's cute, Keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
I plucked it from the pile, nicely done imagery, with few words and maximum impact.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Nicely penned Olive. its beautiful. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thank you Priya. :)
priya

3 Years Ago

my pleasure Olive. :)
A beautiful image, Olive! The last line is a shock because everything seemed so peaceful and pleasant. But then, the moon is a melancholy soul and is never bright and gay. Nicely done! Keep 'em coming!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thanks. :) I just couldn't sleep and I stared at the moon that time, missing home then those words c.. read more
This is a very nice first poem! :) Great job and welcome to Writers Café :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

thanks you for the the very first person to review my first poem here. :)

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