Angel

Angel

A Poem by Aprille
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For my bestfriend: Don’t ever think I’m gone. I am always with you. I am always listening.

"

Don’t ever think that a friend may forget;

That a friend may vanish or go away…

Remember that “True friends never go”

You may not see him, but he’s right behind you

With folded wings, within a distance, watching your steps

Silently listening to the sounds brought by the wind

If you feel that all has left you alone,

Just look back,

You’ll see his eyes shining for you

You’ll see a smile that is made just for you

You’ll see a friend,

Unknown from the world,

Contented to walk behind your shadows.


© 2014 Aprille



Author's Note

Aprille
Thinking of my best friend...

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A lovely write....last line was beautiful....may such friendship keep strengthening....:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thanks anne. :)
I felt your words in this poem so deeply. Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thank you.
Beautiful poem. I have a lot of friends that I don't talk to very often. Some have moved away, others are in college...but, I know they are always there for me :) Wonderful tribute to "real friends"
:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind review. :)
I agree with the logic of the poem. Real friends come near when we need them. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the true ending.
"You’ll see his eyes shining for you
You’ll see a smile that is made just for you
You’ll see a friend,
Unknown from the world,"
Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much. :)
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Be careful of the repeated "you". It can distract from the central idea of the poem. Overall, this has an excellent flow with a timely, hopeful message. Keep writing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much. :)
J. Land

3 Years Ago

My pleasure.
Love how you started it! Keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thanks Emily.
Strong, powerful, much feeling in the phrases and words, pulls bold imagery from every corner. Like this one very much.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :)
Beautiful thoughts, beautifully penned, Olive... You are certainly lucky to have such a friend or guardian angel to walk with you. Nice way to thank him. Good work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Aprille

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review.

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