In Love With Someone Else

In Love With Someone Else

A Poem by Rhonda

In Love With Someone Else

by Rhonda B.

You're in love with someone else

You keep staring at the person in that special gaze

We've been together for nearly 5 years

And you do this to me

How could you?

You always want to sit next to the person

You always talk about that person

I'm ready to leave you

I'm a girl and you're a guy

You're in love with a........guy

 

 

© 2009 Rhonda


Author's Note

Rhonda
this isn't a true thing that happened to me.
i'm 11 turning 12 on june 22 so my writing skills might not be the greatest.

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nice lol. I would be really heart broken if my girlfriend did that to me. I think you need to add some emotion to it. sadness. dispare. etc.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on June 11, 2009

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I'm Rhonda. I'm only 11 turning 12 on June 22, 2009, so i might not have the greatest skills writing. I love writing, reading, listening to music, and more. My favorite music is hip-hop, rnb, rap, pop.. more..

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