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Early One Morning

Early One Morning

A Poem by Imara
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A poem about that clover that moves without anyone moving it.

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One early morning

I stood next to a patch of greens.

Staring strongly at it all

And yet nothing too keen


In the middle of the flora

A single twisted clover jumped,

And pushed itself quickly straight

To face the golden morning light.


I wondered to myself

What should have caused this jump.

Was it a bug whose weight suddenly left

Perhaps a soft low blowing breeze?

Maybe a jolt of growth

Was what brought upon that change.

Or maybe, the sprout just moved

With a flytrap like power

Thusfar unknown to me.


But the more I think about this leaf,

The strong the possibility seems

That standing straight as it did now

This plant has always been.


© 2013 Imara



Author's Note

Imara
How does the flow work? Is the meaning to hard to find? In truth I am talking about little changes in life that we notice but since they are so small we tend to think that that's the way things have always been. Like school colors if we changed them, in 4 years everyone would think that's the way that things always were.

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Loved this piece. As usual, your old soul shines. That's a really cool parallel... the clover that moved and how life itself changes slightly and it goes unnoticed. I guess that's how time flies and the years go by without us even observing it.

Really enjoyed this, as I have all your pieces!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Imara

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I'm glad that my meaning shone through. :)



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Very nice write!! Just loved it. Like the clover life moves on and we don't even notice the difference

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Imara

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very well crafted indeed...enjoyed..:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Imara

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Wow, i loved it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Imara

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
It turned out so real. Just as the school colours. So real.

Posted 4 Years Ago


i like your use of the clover as a metaphor to life and the oblvious changes we make that seem small , so much abyss profundity in this poem i like it

Posted 4 Years Ago


Imara

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review and praise. I truly appreciate it :)
I think this piece is brilliant. The flow is great, and it makes sense. Everything is set up well. Keep it up.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Imara

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Loved this piece. As usual, your old soul shines. That's a really cool parallel... the clover that moved and how life itself changes slightly and it goes unnoticed. I guess that's how time flies and the years go by without us even observing it.

Really enjoyed this, as I have all your pieces!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Imara

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I'm glad that my meaning shone through. :)
Great notion and observation. A nice poem to read with the nice flow.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Imara

4 Years Ago

Haha thanks ^^
Ency Bearis

4 Years Ago

you're welcome
Such a lovely piece :-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Imara

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Imara
Imara

Cranston, RI



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