Fightback

Winners never quit, quitters never win

Distraught

Defeated

No way out

Dejected

Disappointed

Heading for a rout

Beleaguered

Betrayed

by my own

Anger

Aggravated

Resentment grown

Ambitions

Aspirations

Giving myself a try

Rejuvenate

Regenerated

It's do or die

Combat

Confrontation

emerged victorious

Exhilaration

Exultation

A conquest glorious.

 

        -  C. Kumar

                  30^th May 2015

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Chirag. Great write!!! Very reminiscent of another poet on this site and so very well done!!! Love subtle and this meets that expectation so very, very well!!! alf

[Mayank]

I like the format, you can read it together and separately as well. That's shows your efforts, good write.

[Mitali Shah]

Cool and interesting combination of work applied by your creativity Chirag.

[Thesecuts]

I liked this. you're very talented and you should also be very proud of yourselves.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for reviewing my work friend :)

[Robert]

Very original Kumar, and excellent word combinations involved in this piece.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your kind review Robert :)

[andrew mitchell]

Well written piece and an inventive format. Nice to see from the normal!

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your kind review Andrew :)

[AaronFreitas]

Nice work... interesting format and you made it work. Good creativity :)

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your kind review Aaron :)

[Willard Wells]

Different concept in format that I have no opinion on, The words are true and I like your word play. Nice.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for the review Willard :)

[Perkele.7885]

I'll buy this. This is the best that I have seen come from you as it well written even though a bit strangely formatted. This is a job well done.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for the review Raj :D