Devout lips

Devout lips

A Poem by Chirag Kumar

They said,
"She's pious no more."
But, for her,
she attained sanctitude,
when her devout lips
switched ways,
to meet mine.

- C Kumar

1st Sept 2015

© 2015 Chirag Kumar


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We all care to be pious
But what happens when you meet the right person

Do you let go
Or do you choose to do things right this time

So that moment of deciding
It lays the future ahead

Desire is a very strong thing to overcome

Beautiful :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Exactly Nisreenaa. Thanks for stopping by :)



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Nice and cute...............

Posted 8 Years Ago


cute - and they lived happily ever after .. ?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute piece of love and romance.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by and commenting :)
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We all care to be pious
But what happens when you meet the right person

Do you let go
Or do you choose to do things right this time

So that moment of deciding
It lays the future ahead

Desire is a very strong thing to overcome

Beautiful :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Exactly Nisreenaa. Thanks for stopping by :)
beautiful ...great words ..especially words are beautifully placed ...well done bro

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks Sam :)
amazing yaa.. You wrote it so well.. I liked it..:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review Naina :)
Naina

8 Years Ago

always my pleasure Chirag.:)
simply lovely and unique :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks Mitali :)
Society has always shackled love in the name of purity & chastity.
The narrator must be truely important for her then, to go against everything and everyone for the one connection.
Lively imagery.
Lovely write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Thanks fornur review Jyoti. Its high time we open up ourselves to love and not harbor hypocripsy wit.. read more
Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

Indeed. You are welcome.
You have given yourself an honorable position if not lofty position if she can give up her chaste lips to share them with you oh Holy Muckity Muck!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Chirag Kumar

8 Years Ago

Lol. I wish that happens asap :P
such a beautiful image you have painted for us, Chirag...a kiss ordained by God, perhaps... love this...well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on September 2, 2015
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Chirag Kumar
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Mumbai, India



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