The Art of Bore(Dumb!)

The Art of Bore(Dumb!)

A Poem by justAnumber

The picture sits upon the wall, 
it shows its cracks, but does not fall,
The artist gazes out from space, 
the stars on canvas, not His face. 

There's people watching, tisk tisk tisk, 
To hit it big, is to overcome great risk.
The biggest around are smallest in size, 
To get to the top, he shall arise. 

To always look up is to never go back, 
He always moves quick post-planning attacks,
The fall hurts less the higher he climbs, 
More air under the wing makes for smoother glides.


© 2010 justAnumber


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I love this piece. It was a wonderful write. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love this- great meter and rhymes... wonderful last two lines as well. :)
Wonderful write!

-Coral-

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great job on this, i dont know by the title if you're calling this dumb or what but it surely wasnt, i loved this nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was brilliant, honestly the more I read the better it got, I loved it. :)
-Cathrine

Posted 13 Years Ago



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