I Smile in Your Sleep

Love, in my own words.

if you find yourself so lucky

you'll come across a feel

one that would make another jealous

for this one would kill

such a wonderful feeling of joy this brings

such an optimistic sense it seems

to run, everytime the damn phone rings

but fun, if the voice's what you want it to be

to give it all up, just to say 'we'

to allow the small little everything

for there's no problems to even think

post a tug on the arm and a kiss on the cheek

oh, what one would give only to keep

this feeling inside for eternity

one couldn't start to explain these things

how the smallest adjust could push one to speak

if you find yourself so lucky

you'll come across a feel

one that would make another jealous

for this one would kill

this feeling is love but more than a word

can be the most attractive, as well the most absurd

can drive one to drink, or drive where preferred

it sends one to places that one's only heard

mandatorily mutual or others incurred

one would ___________ fill in the verb

do anything to be seen or be heard

a definite audience words never slurred

all of life can seem so deferred

yet when one plus one is one, its learned

give what one can, eventually in turn

one, if lucky, recieves back a simple little word

Reviews

[~Lizzy♬]

I enjoyed this very well. :)

I used to think of love this way.

[Lachenille Papillion]

I enjoyed the rhythm of this and the subject is heartfelt. Well done.