Animals Point of Veiw

Pain 

Everywhere

Can't move

Can't breath

More Pain

I whimper

I cringe

Pain 

Is everywhere

Somebody help

Somebody care

Wait

What is that

That feeling

A gentle pressure

A soft voice

Easing my pain

Easing my fears

I will care for you

The voice says

As the days go by

One after the other

The voice still says

I will care for you

One day the pain

Is gone

That voice 

That soft voice

That gentle

Oh so gentle touch

Made the difference

A foe

Now a friend

Kind and gentle

Making a difference

In another animals life

Author's Note

I haven't decided if this is the final version so it may change.

Reviews

[Louvegrise14]

Arianna I don't know what you were taking about, but this is really good. It's incredible how you "got inside" and animal's head and showed their point of view, which is really hard to do. Besides, I like your style of poetry :)

[Arianna Dean]

What exactly do you mean you don't know what I am talking about?

[Louvegrise14]

On my poem "the Deer" you said "I hope mine is as good as yours" (referring to a poem about an animal). What I meant to say I that you did a good job, and I liked the poem.

[Arianna Dean]

Thank you. I partially wrote this because it has to do with what I want to do for a living. I am in school to get my vet tech license.