Who You Are (Mother)

Who You Are (Mother)

A Poem by Arielle Hill
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For Mother's Day. I REALLY LOVE my mommy.

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A POEM FOR YOU

(Who You Are)

 

Mom, U are jazz in jazzy,

The zazz in pizazz,

The spice in spicy,

With real classy class,

 

The motion in the ocean,

The sunrise to sunset,

The clear day in the sky,

The winning of all the bets,

 

You are Gods twinkle in his eye,

The human version of the Bible,

His beautiful creation he made,

And my American Idol,

 

I'm proud to be your daughter,

I'm proud to be your seed,

I'm proud to be the seed of a pastor,

Who LOVES God indeed,

 

So this is YOUR day,

To reminisce who you are,

Great mother, pastor, and wife,

For you are a great star.

 

HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY!

12th grade

© 2011 Arielle Hill


Author's Note

Arielle Hill
LoVE yOU MomMa! (smile)

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Its more then word
when you love mom
and when its God
there more then letter can to say to be word
And what you just wrote hear
It said more then you heat can beat
I know mother love this
very spiritual, Glory

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very sincere! I like the playful rhymes, its nicely written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you Neva! I really LOVE my mother. She is really a queen in my eyes. (smile)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Now this is wonderful. If my daughter (who is 22) wrote something like this for me, I would be the happiest mother alive. :) XX

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 1, 2011
Last Updated on September 1, 2011
Tags: holiday, mother's day, mommy

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Arielle Hill
Arielle Hill

Montgomery, AL



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My name is Arielle Hill and I am 22 years old. I'm multi-talented but my one goal is to become a singer. I can write poetry (on different subjects), rap, and dance. My sports are basketball, volleybal.. more..

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