Your Dream's Desire

This woman whose beauty would make God weep

The light of my world

Rebecca

I would give to you my smile

that sauntered look and walk

A long mellow daydreamed breeze

that cute look each time we talk

 

I would give to you the sunshine

a kind windy sun flowered field

Hopes to fill your hearts desire

with any dream your mind could

 wield

 

I would give to you the warm rain

sweet songs the whippoorwills sing

The eternal stars of the night

for you I would give everything

 

Author's Note

It is always the inner hope striven for throughout our lives that at one time our dreams will intersect with our reality. Such has been my own experience these last 4 years. A life spent alongside the one you love gives the meaning and purpose so sought for and desired. Happy Anniversary Becky!
Tate

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Tate,

I have been reading your poetry for years. I have listened to the music that you've included with the poetry. I alway turn that off because I want to hear the true you without coloration. I want to hear the words. This piece was different. The music fit. It was an extension. The words were pure. I think this is your finest poem. I have read the poems about your son, and that emotion is so pure. I have read poems about your experiences, again always so pure. But here I see your heart, My Friend. It is so inescapable. You can't hide here, not even a little piece of you. It's all out there. Here is your consuming love. I read this and dropped my head because I am so glad that you have such an all-consuming love. Give your Lady a kiss from me. She is special and has won undying love from a romantic soul. I hope she appreciates the treasure. I suspect that she does, and she does have those penetrating blue eyes.

Greatest respect, and the highest marks!

A devoted Friend,

Rick

[Tate Morgan]

This may be the greatest review i ever received. I read it and in so doing was bestowed the greatest feeling of appreciation and honor. I thank you I am truly humbled
Your friend
Tate

[Rick Puetter]

Very simple, Tate! You are welcome, and I was honored to read such a pure and untarnished poem. A truly fine work.

[Marie]

You have great gifts to offer...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Tate, Rick has said all there is to say. This is such a magnificent display of deep and pure love. I sense it is reciprocated and pray this is so. You so deserve it Tate and Rebbecca is a lucky woman to have you.

[quinfinn]

she is lovely, Tate. and believe me when i tell you that i felt and absorbed every line in this touching write. a wonderful homage to the object of your affection and desire. lovely!

[Eve]

This is gloriously romantic Tate, perfect devotion in twelve lines or less, you said it best.

[MOON]

Heartfelt touching tribute to love, long may it endure.

[David Scott]

It is wonderful to feel the compelling need to "give". That is a true expression of love. It is indeed the giving and not the gift that changes the heart and thus changes the path of eternity.
Thank you for this gift Tate. Please keep on giving.
Be well.

[lee von cleef]

A mint on the pillow every night,a hand in the struggle,a compliment,a ocean to sail,the woman of nights,or moments,just the....one, wink ,nod.....a fire of depth,these gals are few,glad to know she gives you the balance to be you.

[kimmy]

Thank you for sending me a read request for this:) I loved this poem, as I feel these way about my husband:) he is my everything and being able to be with him and have the love that we share everyday is amazing. This was very heartful and I enjoyed it very much.

[Michael G.]

Pure poetry here. A true love described at its best. Well written and well done. You are a lucky man, Tate. But, I would also say, you two, are a lucky couple to have each other in this way and fashion.

[David Lewis Paget]

A beautiful tribute to your wife, Tate, that I'm sure she appreciates, and reciprocates. Not many people have such a strong love underpinning their relationships, but you do. Long may it endure.