Your Dream's Desire

This woman whose beauty would make God weep

The light of my world

Rebecca

I would give to you my smile

that sauntered look and walk

A long mellow daydreamed breeze

that cute look each time we talk

 

I would give to you the sunshine

a kind windy sun flowered field

Hopes to fill your hearts desire

with any dream your mind could

 wield

 

I would give to you the warm rain

sweet songs the whippoorwills sing

The eternal stars of the night

for you I would give everything

 

Author's Note

It is always the inner hope striven for throughout our lives that at one time our dreams will intersect with our reality. Such has been my own experience these last 4 years. A life spent alongside the one you love gives the meaning and purpose so sought for and desired. Happy Anniversary Becky!
Tate

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Tate,

I have been reading your poetry for years. I have listened to the music that you've included with the poetry. I alway turn that off because I want to hear the true you without coloration. I want to hear the words. This piece was different. The music fit. It was an extension. The words were pure. I think this is your finest poem. I have read the poems about your son, and that emotion is so pure. I have read poems about your experiences, again always so pure. But here I see your heart, My Friend. It is so inescapable. You can't hide here, not even a little piece of you. It's all out there. Here is your consuming love. I read this and dropped my head because I am so glad that you have such an all-consuming love. Give your Lady a kiss from me. She is special and has won undying love from a romantic soul. I hope she appreciates the treasure. I suspect that she does, and she does have those penetrating blue eyes.

Greatest respect, and the highest marks!

A devoted Friend,

Rick

[Tate Morgan]

This may be the greatest review i ever received. I read it and in so doing was bestowed the greatest feeling of appreciation and honor. I thank you I am truly humbled
Your friend
Tate

[Rick Puetter]

Very simple, Tate! You are welcome, and I was honored to read such a pure and untarnished poem. A truly fine work.

[melissa]

Love the poem keep them coming

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you feel free to go through whatever
you like

[melissa]

Your welcome

[SheWolfNLust]

this surely is a most stunning poem to your lovely wife, each word most heartfelt, my sweetie and I haven't fought either, we've been together 7 yrs,

[Michael G. Smith]

Sounds like love. I wish everyone could have what you and I have found. I never thought fairy tales could come true until I met my wife. Happy anniversary to you and Rebecca and may Christ continue to bless your union.

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Mike Ill get back on here and review a bit soon Thank you I guess you and i are the lucky ones . But after the life and hell I once knew I was due a bit of happiness Thank you

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wow.. The Lady and her Love is appreciated & congratulated!! Loads of Happiness...

Fantastic piece.. :-)

Keep Sharing!!

Good Wishes!!

[Tate Morgan]

thank you so much

[Blue]

Wow. You are a proof of a man who's willing to give everything just for the woman he loves. You are so romantic Tate, Rebecca is lucky to have you. I mean, you are both lucky and blessed to have each other.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you I am a lucky soul to have my rebecca

[SAYED THANGAL]

well fit words coined with music, to express the beauty

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you I am glad you liked it

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

You certainly have a lovely inspiration for this write, Tate, and Becky has a truly talented poet and romantic soul mate. Beautiful piece!

[Tate Morgan]

Rebecca is a peach lol Thank you

[Rita L. Sev]

A lovely Anniversary/Valentine message - or any day you want to express this deep love! Very sweet, Tate!

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Rita Yeah I am a lucky man to be so happy and content I suppose. However I am well aware that I dont deserve her lol

[Rachelle]

All I can think of is: It's Mommy and Daddy.

[Tate Morgan]

How sweet a thought to have thank you

[Cassie]

wow!!! This is the sweetest anniversary message ever. This is really good, God bless Rebecca for inspiring you to write such good stuff. I enjoyed

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you so much Life is good

[Leigh]

A beautiful tribute, I didn't actually need to read the poem, your preamble was so strong and full of emotion. Happy Anniversary and Happy Valentines Day to you both

Leigh

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you so much So happy you liked it