My Girl

My Girl

A Poem by Tate Morgan
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The girl I loved most in life

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My Girl


With the girl I loved most in life

I walked in street lamps glow

Could she hear my heart calling

for the love I never show

 

Treading lightly along beside

her footprints marked the snow

The warmth of heart I felt for her

I doubt she will ever know

 

With the girl I loved most in life

I walked in street lamps glow

Oh if I could stop Earth turning

then she might never go

 


 


Tate Morgan 2008


© 2021 Tate Morgan


Author's Note

Tate Morgan
A gem stone of my life every bit as precious as the eyes from which she views the world.

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What a beautiful, romantic poem, Tate. I detect a note of uncertainty as well in the last two lines of both the second and third stanzas as is the way with love, with everything really. The imagery is beautiful as always. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

Thank you it was a memory of a time long ago and a dream I had to be with a girl That i idolized
the imagery in this is awesome. :) you put me on that snowy, lamp-lit street. good work :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

awe well that was the way i remember it dear. Thank you
Aria

10 Years Ago

you're welcome
Short but an oh so filled romantic piece. Somethings are best and more heartfelt in a short format. Lovely, superb read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

Hi rose Oh to be romanitc does fill the heart thank you
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BlackRose

10 Years Ago

Sure does, when it's a true heart. Your welcome.
"Oh if I could stop Earth turning
then she might never go" Goodness. The last line touched my heart. Such intense emotion captured in just two lines.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

Thank you I am humbled and honored
Seems more a song in the style and format you put this in --- Tate...again...befits the your work and go to read another one from you...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

Thank you Glen
Glen Yumang Manese

10 Years Ago

You're welcome...making head way with all these RR's on my plate...may be back to normal after a few.. read more
Romantic poetry to me is one of the hardest genres to write. Tate you did very well with this one. Not maudlin or mushy, but with maximum effect and a minimum of words. Often less is more. Great write Tate!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

Hi dave I have great inpiration many that i have written are romantic but they are about the women I.. read more
David O Whalen  (O Haolin in Celtic)

10 Years Ago

Good poets must have roots in Ohio. I see you're from Marion O. I grew up in Loveland Ohio.
Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

Yes I am thank you I dont know I suppose the Midwest creates a certain brand of us lol
Very beautiful. A sympathetic rendering of one of Earth's most numerous creatures: the tongue-tied man. Still, this touches my heart.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

LOl you would say that . I was probably 17 at the time and i have learned a few things since then
lovely poem Tate. Lyrical and gentle.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

TL thanks i guess i am the hopeless romantic
What a beautiful piece! Captivating & heartfelt! Loved it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

Hi thank you for that. i am glad it touched you
She cast a spell on your heart and your pen. A magical piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tate Morgan

10 Years Ago

Pryde oh yea she did do that thank you

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Marion , OH



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