God To Man

I am the deepening of the blue

                    

  Picture son Tater-tot

I'm the deepening of the blue

upon the sky of man

I am the stories all told

like the billowing blowing sand

 

I am he who gave you life

beneath my sky gone gold

As sunset burns and dies

I give you my stars to hold

 

You have but one fleeting chance

plant the seeds of love to grow

Create a life long everlasting

such as none could ever know

 

Then you will be the gentle soul

upon whom all life does seek

You will inherit this little world

you the loving and the meek

Author's Note

I wish for all of us that this be true.

Reviews

[Nayan]

My salute to thee, O! the Happy and all Loving Soul - Tate!

I loved so much these lines...

"Plant the seeds of love to grow.
Create a life long everlasting.
Such as none could ever know.

Then you will be the happy soul."

Thanks for such great inspiration! I would also try to write by listening to my heart and soul :)

[Nautili]

very nice, tate. I like the picture of the baby, since he/she has a fresh start at life, at making it count. Good for a new year! If we all had your mindset, the world would be a better place in which to live.

[Helena]

Oh this was breathtaking! Beautiful beyond words.....I'm speechless
and very moved by this poem. Bravo! Helena

[James K. Blaylock]

Congrats on the win! Great write. Be blessed.

jkb

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem!

[Bud]

Beautiful piece! Shows your Talent. Keep up the Magnificent works of art, my friend!

[deeps]

Aw this is so wonderful and beuatiful

[Emily B]

I love that first line . . . this is lovely stuff.