Loves Refrain

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Love entered in my heart one day

a sorrowed, war, torn, guest

When she asked to be let in

I had her sit and rest

______________________________

She woke my sleep with anguish

shook my hopes with tears

When my heart felt to sing

she filled its joy with fears

______________________________

As now she has gone away

I miss the old sweet pain

Sometimes when night whistles in

the wind plays loves refrain

 

Tate

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Reviews

[LA Lorena]

"He stopped loving her today", that's what this brings to mind for me, one of the saddest country songs ever sung, and I think he sang it with her in mind. It's funny how sometimes we most want and crave that which is worst for us and our state of mental health. That which causes us to feel the most, be it good or bad, is often most memorable in our lives and hearts.

[Tate Morgan]

You are correct about He stopped loving her today he was talking about her Thank you I like your picture now very vibrant

[LA Lorena]

Thanks Tate.

[Tate Morgan]

The honor is all mine

[The Nameless]

Beautiful =D

It's not your average desperate over-in-love poem, it's different.

"I had her sit and rest" - great line, well put

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you i wanted it to say more than the usual

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful sentiment Mr Morgan

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Ric always a pleasure to see you here.

[The Cobra Lounge]

Good stuff Tate.

btw..your videos are not working...I've noticed this on some of your stuff.

And...not that my opinion matters.....I think I would stick with the black font...the pic is so beautiful with your words...the red feels like a distraction?

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Beth I always smile when you stop over

[N!LoC]

love's refrain... that title says it all .. really :-)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you

[David Scott]

Was this really love or just one more pretender?
Love concurs all, see's all, knows all, heals all.
This soft lament of how our perceptions of love can feel is a tender and honest reflection of pain.
Well done again Tate!

[Tate Morgan]

Hi Dave I am glad you liked it Yes love more than just lust and it takes us places we cant get alone

[Jack...]

Very well done, this poem lives on in the love it has left behind to linger on the wind.

[Tate Morgan]

You and I are old enough to remember Tammy Wynette and George Jones. Alcohol sure made a Hell of their Heaven

[leighgreen]

I like the last two lines they give this poem a real greatness

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you

[Enid Blake]

Aint that the truth!
A very bittersweet poem, I like it ;)

[Tate Morgan]

Bittersweet it fits ome peoples personality and it touches all of us in one way or another

[michael.c.m]

Suggested reading. Had one of those, once. Puzzle pieces just cannot be forced to fit. Good rhyming. And topic.

[Tate Morgan]

thanks Michael