Beautiful Bliss

We stand unafraid of the night.

 

 

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Ambling along the endless beach.
We gaze into the imminent night.
Knowing the melting sun will leave.
Only to return at first mornings light.

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The pounding waves of the ocean.
Tell a tattle tale story of life.
Promising to last for eons to come
We forget our daily strife.

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Shadows cast beauties glow.
Upon the face of one so fair.
Telling me of your glowing soul.
Wrapped in the light brown hair.

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The cooling sands beneath our feet.
Like the countless worlds out there.
Stars peak out from shimmering darkness.
As if night lights from God to share.

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Misty fog rolls off the coast.
Dancing in an unknowing way.
Telling of things we can only dream.
Like a grand mysterious ballet.

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Of things we know so little about.
We hold to each other tight.
Assuring each of the others love.
Stand unafraid of the imposing night.

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Resting our souls upon the sand.
We build a fire to light the sky.
Showing the way home to ancestors.
And the one that caught my eye.

Tate

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Reviews

[LadyNaida]

I love the beach and in the evening is breath taking.

[George Love]

Your descriptive language lets the reader imagine and experience you story. Excellent

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how wonderfully descriptive..must have been a great night :)

[Elizabeth]

like a mysterious ballet.... this is lovely.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Beautiful imagery, must have been a true night to remember. My only difficulty was the size of the text - it is very hard to read but well worth the squinting - lol. Thanks.
Light,
SiddARTha

[Luna Northstar]

Awww, its so sweet and romantic. so much loving emotion you put into this. Amazing imagry, it completely captivates me!

[E. A. Fielder]

The feel is so romantic. I love it. I guess this one captivates me most with it's light heart loving emotion.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Wow, what a beautiful piece this is..
Such a brilliant usage of imagery.
"Misty fog rolls off the coast.
Dancing in an unknowing way." - Absolutely loved these lines a lot..Very well written Tate :)

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I love this piece! It is a very visual poem that paints a picture of two lovers on the beach, perfectly. I really enjoyed reading it.

[ღ Donna DeLong Ma..]

This is so beautiful and is about my favorite
place to do my writing. The beach or the
lake at my house is where I draw so much
solitude and strength. This was awesomely
done both in content and presentation.
Loved it.

Hugs
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