A monster you created

I have lost every ounce of confidence I had,

And this truth now hurts me bad.

I have been stripped bare of my pride,

And for avenging this, inside me a fire ignites.

I have been hurt to the core,

My existence and self esteem forcefully explored, 

And have evaporated in thin air,

Life is just unbearably unfair.

Every little victory I achieved,

Is now believed, to have never conceived.

Every raw form of good I was,

has impeccably disappeared in midair because,

I have been assaulted,

I have been trifled with,

And this has led to my destruction.

Enjoy! For this was your personal instruction.

I want to cry badly, but the tears don’t come out.

I want to screech madly, but I’m unable to shout.

The biggest pain has been to my broken pride,

And there seems no one to be by my side.

My utopia has now been destroyed, along with my soul.

My dreams have been crushed, at the worst possible toll.

I can only despair now, but a fire is burning already in my eyes.

I will fight past every trap and entrap you in my own lies.

Fight me? Try your best, but I’m a monster you created.

I will penetrate past your weaknesses for I am a hybrid of all you ever hated.

Author's Note

Okay so I came up with this in five minutes when I was really depressed, so please bear me.

Reviews

[Emily Rae]

love it. especially the line, "I am a hybrid of all you ever hated."

[Gone]

The feeling cascades out of your writing. You are using metaphor well and you closed the poem nicely. There are some excellent quotable lines that resonated with my own past experience. great work Arlery

[brenda]

no i love this today happened the same thing to me i was gonn write to but the inspiration just flew out of my mind nice expressed i love plastering my feelings of paper and sometimes persons do that withouth even realizing the damage hope you feel better

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this, and I can really relate, It's so sad but still beautiful.
"I want to cry badly, but the tears don’t come out.
I want to screech madly, but I’m unable to shout."
My favorite stanza I think. Amazing, powerful, and I love the last few stanzas...it seemed like you were strating to com eout of your depression a little, but don't be sad, because it'll all be okay (:

[Erinne S.]

Wow, this was powerful! You really expressed your feelings well. Loved it!

~Erinne