I'm so cool

I was willing to write something cool

My eyes are fresh,
I prefer best men's style brands.
I live by my own rules,
this is why I'm cool.

My hair in spikes,
I ride superbikes
at the speed of light
this is why I'm cool.

Girls go crazy over me
when I walk down the streets.
Put my headphones on
this is why I'm cool.

Enemies don't dare to mess,
I've got Bruce Lee like reflex-es.
Anyway, I am kind with my friends
and this is why I am so cool.

Reviews

[Solar]

Kewl.

Two 'povs' - one from the poet taking the p...s about notions of cool and the 'pov' of the poem's protagonist inviting the reader to see beyond the cool to his warm-heart.

Bruce Lee - an original juxtaposed with commercialised 'cool brands' - that invites reflection - the one being an original and the others being 'off-the-peg' versions.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as long as a person has really good, long time friends...he or she can be considered "Cool"!

[Willard Wells]

I am left with all kinds of words below the surface of this piece. but it is excellent no matter what the back story. Well done.

Some of those thoughts have to do with fantasy and reality within your words and your own mind. A sheltered life perhaps I've had, but Spiked hair and motor bike, "Japan", yep. Delhi?? WTF

A moment please as I attempt to wrap my mind around a spiked haired motor bike dude going down the path to the Taj Mahal. Well Done young man. Peace out.

[armin]

Thank you, sir.

[DoormanDan]

Your definition of cool is one that anybody with plenty of sense in their noggin would know to be true. All of those loud, cocky, inconsiderate people who only care about the brand of clothing they wear, and not the feelings of those around them, that claim to be cool are just fake. The real cool people are the ones who care about others. Nicely written, this is something that needed to be said. :)

[armin]

Thanks for sharing your thoughts man.

[Lavender Soya]

Indeed, this poem's so cool. Great rhythm and rhyme scheme. Nice work! Thanks for sharing Armin! :-)

[Emily]

Cute and sassy! Nice job, Armin! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the positive feel to the poem. Good to have confident and goals. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[nazia]

What a presentation.. Liked the ending the most. Benevolence always pays and that's what makes you cool. Nice write :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

It's cool, Armin. You've succeeded in your goal of writing something cool. Well done. (love the line: I've got Bruce Lee like reflex-es.) :) Rudi

[R Smith]

I guess you're cool no doubt about it, certainly an unusual and original write Armin, very good :)