I am for peace

I am one with God

I am the breeze over the ocean,
I am the snowfall of winters.

I am the Sun scattering rays of hope,
I am the hope for rain in the deserts.

I am a bird accompanying the clouds,
I am the sand resting in peace.

I am a song for love beats,
I am the simulation of your heartbeats.

Author's Note

Thanks for your time for reading.

Reviews

[C. Rose]

Favorite lines are "breeze over ocean" and "sand resting in peace"

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

That is a very optimistic and sweet write! You've shone the light and positivity unto us, it's contagious, we cannot help but spread it unto others as well!

[marcus]

I liked this one, great job!!!

[Emily]

Very calming write, Armin. My only issue is the second to last line, "I am a song for love beats," because it's a little confusing and I don't know what you meant to say. Maybe check the grammar on it. Great write!

[armin]

Thankyou so much Emily and that line simply means 'I am a love song'.

[Emily]

Very nice! Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and gentle words. Create calm and peace for me. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[armin]

Thanks coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Madison Rose]

I love this poem Armin. There are so many things that connect us to God. I once had a dream where I was under a starry sky in a meadow that was surrounded by a beautiful forest. With me was a man who I only knew in my dream. When we connected, our love for each other was so powerful that our souls joined with each other, and for a brief moment we became the wind, and the trees. When I awoke from the dream, I desperately wanted to remember what it felt like to be the wind, and the trees, but I could not remember. But, I can feel God, this I can remember :)

[armin]

Thankyou Madi for sharing your dream, and your kind review.

[R Smith]

excellent poem Armin, your writing has great potential :)

[armin]

That's a great compliment Richard, thankyou so much for your kind words.

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write. Powerful tribute to your faith :)

[armin]

Thanks Aaron.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

This is a good message you give us in your poem. Thank you for sharing, Armin. :) Rudi

[armin]

Thanks Rudi for your words it is much appreciated.

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Great write with a beautiful message... we should all be vessels for and instruments of peace.

[armin]

Thankyou so much FT ,very well said we all should be the instruments of peace and Harmony.