Gone

You promised me you would never let go

You promised me you would never leave

You said you loved me more than anything

You said you wanted to be with me forever

 

The pictures I have of you are hard to look at

Everywhere I go there is a memory waiting to be seen

Every direction I turn it seems like your their

There is no place for me to hide to escape it

 

I can still hear you voice clearly in my head

I can see your beautiful smile circling my mind

The stories you used to tell me replay over and over

I can’t giggle the way I used to with you

 

My dreams are full of you and the pain you left behind

I wake up from the nightmares you left for me

It’s hard to be awake and to fall sleep

It’s a terrible memory that surrounds me all the time

 

You made me fell protected then took it away

I used to feel safe when I was with you

There’s no one else I could turn to that understood me

I can’t trust anyone now because of you

 

Was everything you said to me a bunch of lies

Were you purposely trying to hurt me

Did you plan to throw my gentle heart away

I wonder at times if you even really cared about me

 

Now I feel more alone then when you were here

Tears fall all the time because of you

I’ve become invisible to everyone around me

People treat me like I’m not even alive

 

You’re always going to be the memory no one forgets

I’m always going to be the memory that always fades

You’re the person everyone will always love

I’ll always be the girl that no one loves

 

You’ll never feel the pain I’ve felt in my life

You’ll never have to fight to live to the next day

You’ll never truly understand the way I feel

You’ll never hold me in your arms again

 

It hurts to wake up to pain every single morning

The energy it takes to get up drains me every day

 Everyone acts like they knew you but I knew you best

Why did you have to leave me

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a hard feeling ot feel. I like every one in the world saw you because of whom you were with but when it ended you became the invisible person. That probably isn't true but I do know how that feels. The flow of this poem is done nicely and the emotions are clearly penned in this piece.

[Brad]

a hard sting that doesn't stop...the venom throbs forever in the heart...i know this poem, maybe written differently...but the sentiment the same...false promises...buyers remorse...i'm there

[Dark Lady Phoenix]

Very nice. I really can feel the emotion in this! Good job

[Immortal1967]

heartbreak is never easy, but letting your feelings bleed out in writing is a good way to release some of that pain...love this one.

[deeps]

Oh WOW! this is so sad, but also ever so touching.
Such a wonderful flow and rhyme scheme as well.
Amazing write!

[al25]

Nicely done as usual. Lots of angry emotions in this one.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Sad but a very amazing poem. As I read this I can tell how much pain your really in. I'm sorry he done that to you, and I pray that things will get better for me. Sometime love bits.... Take care, and wait for that happy day. It will come to you some day.