Questioning

14/07/12

Something is not right these days

My mind is going insane

Troubles and troubles

Yells and yells

And reasoning to myself

I walk like dead scarecrow dug out of its grave

Holding a light over my head

Before I fall and a break a leg

Reviews

[Le parisien]

That's bad !!! Try to get the reason why it happens !
Technically speaking the poem is amazing, although it's very short, it is full of pathos,
the sound is intuitive and natural, the metrica almost perfect,
great job =D

[Pax]

a brilliant used of images...i like it..

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

Wonderful work

[Rhea752]

i like the scarecrow line the best. it gives you a good description of how the character would look and act and walk like. great poem once again!!! :)

[Leslie Philibert]

I`ve read a lot of Amila`s writing, and I like it. This is good too, with its wry, ironical feeling and a great last line.

[Amila Jay]

Thanks a bunch :))

[dan nacario]

very interesting..

[Amila Jay]

thanks :))

[joshua deathdealer]

I feel ya!! I feel like this a lot. Excellent portrayal.

[Amila Jay]

Thanks :-D

[Coyote Poetry]

The mind can't figure out this world. Too much to think about. I like the comparing yourself to the scarecrow. A interesting ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Amila Jay]

Thanks for the review :-D

[Swapz747]

Painful feelings touch more.. Great poem.. :-)

[Amila Jay]

True!!! Thanks for the review :-D

[Rhea]

everyone feels like that once in a while.. I have been going through it just recently! A very well expressed poem. I love the third line from the bottom. Well done!

[Amila Jay]

Thanks for the review :-D