A prayer

A prayer

A Poem by Amila Jay
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An angel prays

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The curse is over

I released the pain

The fire burning flame

I now water the seeds

To grow back life

To search my soul

Between heaven’s eye

And the devils smile

© 2011 Amila Jay


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Amila Jay
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This is one of your best.It is so finely balanced, and without much prolixity, you have used images which are just perfect.

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A amazing prayer. I like the content and the very strong ending to the poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
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This one was totally amazing, loved this.

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Added on August 29, 2011
Last Updated on August 29, 2011
Tags: life, teen, young adult, modern, new age, religion

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Amila Jay
Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka



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