Forever's End

Forever's End

A Poem by artemis

When love suddenly ends

All good ceases and bends

The dim sorrow of hate

Will crash everything we create

Care, loyalty, trust and sometimes even hope

It will all vanish to evil’s highest scope

Slowly it happens

Vastly it deepens

Little by little hate will take over

And unconsciously we’ll walk to the end of forever.

© 2012 artemis


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good poem...simple but powerful

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 rating hehehehehe...!
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Posted 11 Years Ago


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has depth and introspection, makes you think...enjoyed this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Excellent thoughts of reality indeed. 100/100...congrats:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Such a short poem but such a simple truth. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like this. It was written beautifully. Amazing. :))

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this! It was hauntingly beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is beautifully written..."And unconsciously we'll walk to the end of forever." Amazing line :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on November 23, 2012
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