Gone

Gone

A Chapter by Luna
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Inspired by a wordless song, the flowing of the music made these words pop into my head.

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As the raindrops fall
Onto the window pane,
I feel that each one
Is a tear cried for me.
My love, you have  left me alone
With no-one to hold me close
And protect me from the storm.


© 2010 Luna


Author's Note

Luna
If anyone wonders, the song is titled Chaconne 2 (with guitar) by Yiruma

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Gracious and melancholy; with limited words a universe of thoughts and feelings is unveiled; just how poetry should be! Thank you for your thoughts.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I know what you mean about songs inspiring writing.
If you look at my book "Lifescape" sometime, the chapter "Any Other Name" Was inspired by a purely instrumental classical piece called "Any Other Name" by Thomas Newman. You should get on playlist.com and listen to it. You would like It I think. It's also on the playlist on my profile.
http://www.playlist.com/searchbeta/tracks#Any%20Other%20Name-%20Thomas%20Newman

Keep up the great work Luna.

Posted 14 Years Ago


beautiful!!! alot was said in a few words. i think thats the best kind of poems great job!!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I can relate to this poem a lot. I think keeping this poem short creates a whole sense of empathy which I find in the line "is a tear cried for me.", it really is a excellent poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is awesome! I love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


You have left me speechless. This is beautiful. I love it. It's so short, yet packs a large amount of emotion. I wonder if you can do a two line poem...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Rain in this poem reminds me of flowing tears. It is sad thou because she misses him so and the security he gave her. Short and sweet, I can never write short poems that actually get a message across. It is a good heart felt write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Such a sad write here but beuatifully written.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Luna
Luna

Civil War Capital, VA



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