Ocean

Wrote this for english

From rolling waves massaging the sand

To raging storms, tossing and turning 

The bipolar soul of the dark waters.

The cloudy blue-green water lies still,

Not a crease on the surface

Until the lightning crashes and clouds burst,

Letting out the rage of the sky

And awakening the beast in the ocean.

Reviews

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

I really like the imagery here but wished it had more verses.....

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I have read a lot of your stuff but this is by far by favorite.

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A tender and observant piece richly full of life and incredibly beautiful imagery. Very well written. A pleasure to read. Your English tutor must be proud? "From rolling waves massaging the sand To raging storms, tossing and turning The bipolar soul of the dark waters." That's a masterful and beautiful opening to a poem.

[J.Black]

Imagery pops out all over this page- washing it up. Great work!

[Sexy P3nguin]

A great write. It has great description which is important in poetry and you paint a picture for the reader. The image is a great painting. Going from calm to storms was a great example of transition which again is hard in poetry. In a nut shell it's a great write. Good Job. ㋡

[Theresa]

Beautiful imagery and detail. I loved the line:
"The bipolar soul of the dark waters"
Great piece. Nicely done.

[melissa]

very nice:)