The Day of Demons

So many few

Had broken hearts

Sucked dry

From the evil one

Picked clean were their bones

Till they crumble to dust

And scattered by the wind

 

So many few

Survived that blood sucking creature

Their hearts crumbled

And the body’s drained

Till pale as white snow

 

So many few

Lived to tell the tale

Of that blood sucking creature

How it’s brutal strength

And inhuman speed

Bested the best of men

Till their bodies were crushed and

Their bodies tossed

Like rag dolls

 

So many few

Forgot that day

The day the demon

Massacred the town

 

 

 

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this great winning poem!

[Lucky Lucy Lamb]

LOVED this, made me wanna go grrrrr

[Leah Jane]

Holy crow! So fantastic!

[Leah C]

Wow, love it. Good write keep it up like totallly!

[LauraH]

WOAH! that is like professional

[Abd-afeez]

I really like this. Good one.

[Starting Over]

Rrrrrrr Vampires! This was good! I liked it!