Your Untarnished Mind

Your Untarnished Mind

A Poem by Martina

...abstract and does not make sense.

And while we are twisted, we are bound,
By a fate that seems to draw us near
In a tight circle that is, in truth, a deceiving spiral.
And once again I transcend into a whirlpool like abyss that is the deception
Of your perfectly untarnished mind.

© 2013 Martina

Author's Note

It doesn't make sense does it? I wasn't really thinking of anything while typing this, I just typed it up.......haha. This is really bad isn't it?!

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I disagree. It's beautiful, but it seems incomplete. It reads more like the end of a slightly larger poem. Perhaps you could come back in a bit and write a beginning for it?

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Added on April 26, 2012
Last Updated on April 27, 2013
Tags: abyss, mind, abstract, poem, poetry



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