Have you ever loved

Have you ever loved

someone you never doubt

have you ever moved

somewhere in the south

Did you ever search

for true happyness

Have you been to church

have you ever made success

Have you ever got an emotion

do you think that you are good

You go trough a painless proportion

again in front of gates of hell you stood

Reviews

[*Evelen*]

Very strong and interesting poem. Another good one! Grr you're so good at rhyming! Good job, and thanks for sharing!

[Susan]

interesting poem...i can indentify with it in some aspects. very good writing.