Achievement

Do you Achieve a lot in your life

I like to achieve

whatever i catch

I like to believe

It's easy to watch

 

But nothing is hard

for me this time

now is the start

of my prime.

 

Achieved all I could

finished the deeds

Now i would

go in to peace

 

Nothing can stop me

nothing at all

No one can top me

even in my fall.

 

 

Reviews

[Lonesome Traveler]

this is nice.. for me it's saying you have achieved everything that you could die... if that's not it then.. ok.. XD

[Ed Hart]

hubris

[Theresa]

This is uplifting and a nice change from the usual down in the dumps out look on life. I think it had a great message, to achieve all that you want and let nothing hold you back. It is a great motto to live by. The poem is done well and I really like the first verse:
"I like to achieve
whatever i catch
I like to believe
It's easy to watch"

It sets the tone for the rest of the poem. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.