Love or Illusion

Short one.

This is the question

love or illusion

May be I am guessing

there is no conclusion

It somehow exists

but is hardly seen

Whatever the twists

what it actually means

It's hard to explain

you're kind of inspired

You'are first to blame

you're never  tired

Searching for the one

spending every moment

You are just so wrong

it isnt your torment

Reviews

[HardCoreReFusion]

This reminds me of when I have met really great people and things go well between us like they are steadily moving toward love, but then a hidden trait or characteristic arises between us and it makes you wonder, how could someone I thought was so right for me be just another person who tried... very good!

[Lonesome Traveler]

my goodness.. this is great for aspiring "lovers".. XD

[*Evelen*]

Awesome poem! Like how you are wondering if it's love or an illusion. You never know if you're just seeing what you want, or if it's true. Good job!

[Theresa]

Short and sweet and sometimes that is all you need to convey what it is that is on your mind. Once again the words flow it is written very well. I was going to pickout a verse I like the best, but I feel like they all compliment each other and each verse ties into the next. Another wonderful poem. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.