God Bless Me

God Bless Me

A Poem by Angel Veselinov
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One Prayer for the Faithful hope u like it.

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God bless me give me strength 
god save me from the sins i spent

God bless me show me light
no don't leave me if i have to die tonight

God bless me set me free
give me life and let me be

God bless me show me love
god bless me with the stars above

God bless me make me good
god bless me make me understood

God bless me and my soul
god be my father and take control

God bless me don't let me suffer
god bless me and ascend me upper.

© 2010 Angel Veselinov


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In the lines 'God bless me give me strength' , God bless me give me strength', 'God bless me set me free' ,'God bless me show me love' , 'God bless me make me good' I think you need to include a comma after the first me. It was a beautiful poem as always!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on August 15, 2010
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Tags: Prayer, Poem, Rhyme, Religious, Blessing, Bless, God

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Angel Veselinov
Angel Veselinov

Plovdiv, Bulgaria



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Heal The World, Hope that you like my poetry. I like to write motivational and positive poetry to inspire people and help them trough hard times and when they lost their faith. I hope that you like.. more..

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