So She Writes

So She Writes

A Poem by Ciara Di Salle
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Older poem I did

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And surely it’s

The screaming in your

Ears at night that brings

Your true voice to the light

A wretched monster thinking on his

Own imprisoned by the delicate face of a

Young girl and so she WRITES.


© 2013 Ciara Di Salle



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Hey!

This is truly awesome and nicely written. And I especially like the ending and for me I kind of relate. I find writing so much easier late at night. I’ve felt really bad a few times during my life. This is kind of how I felt during this time. I could write harsh and very descriptive stories extremely saddened poems during that time. A lot said in a very few words and impact was great!

Good job, I like it!

- MT


Posted 4 Years Ago


Ciara Di Salle

4 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it! Congrats on getting through those times as well, I know it can be tough
Very powerful. Short but to the point. I like how you chose your words to express.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ciara Di Salle

4 Years Ago

Thanks again :)
i like this..the muse as a monster imprisoned within the delicate girl who writes..

she hears the screaming, it awakens her...but the monster must be kind to her, or she won't let him out.

so much said in so few words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ciara Di Salle

4 Years Ago

Thank you! That is exactly what I was getting at!
I think that the way this is written is very well constructed, as is the content. It's very intricate for something so short.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Ciara Di Salle

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
when i looked at your profile i thought nothing special, another teen spilling forth filth on a s****y website i haven't visited for years, After looking through a few poems, my opinion wasn't changed very much, though many have told me thats a hard thing to do, if you read any of my poetry you will probably laugh, its all fairly old and not very good by any standard. i'm more into short prose currently. i'm creating a group for writers to build other styles and work eachother up through working together on pieces, I usually dont accept outsiders (people out of the US) to join but seeing as your canadian, and i do enjoy canada, maybe you can join us. i enjoyed this piece however harsh my words were it was nice, short and sweet, I hope to hear from you soon,

Your Queen,


We also do alot of audio drama work if your interested in branching out a bit more

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on September 15, 2013
Last Updated on September 15, 2013
Tags: dark, demons, poetry, poem, trapped, writing, scream

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Ciara Di Salle
Ciara Di Salle

Canada



About
My name is Ciara, I am 17 years old. I am an artist, a student, and a writer. I am currently working on my first novel. I love Doctor Who, Sherlock, Harry Potter, Star Wars, Torchwood, Supernatural.. more..

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