The Sounds of Spring

The wind…

It dances,

Granting kisses

To everyone it passes.

The birds…

They sing

Beatiful songs

For all to dance to.

The crickets…

They play

Violins made of limbs

Joining the owl’s drum.

The children…

They laugh,

Joyful of nature,

The rebirth of playtime.

The rain...

It pitters,

Pattering on pavement

Nursing the world to health.

The spring…

It’s vocal,

Sending messages

Of a new beginning.

Author's Note

Please feel free to be as constructively honest as you wish. Any suggestions or corrections are much appreciated. Do not rate or review based on opinion or subject of this piece. If you would like the favor returned please send me a read request or a message with the piece you wish for me to review! Happy writing :D

Reviews

[Jackson H. Harley]

Love this piece, such a great description of my third favourite season :p don't know why but I absolutely love the line "violins made of limbs," great piece :)

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you very much :D I am particulary fond of that line too. It just popped in my head and I was holy crap batman I have got to use that!

[Jackson H. Harley]

It flows so well, and if batman is involved you can't go wrong ;)

[Briana O'Connor]

dang skippy!

[Malister Mikey]

I really always loved the Spring time, and you captured it perfectly here.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you very much

[R Smith]

Lovely Briana, it has to be one of the finest offerings about spring that I have read, love the rain pitter pattering just gorgeous :)

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you so much

[TL Boehm]

Another fine poem. I think my favorite verse is the one referring to rain, but the whole thing is light and gentle like a spring breeze.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you for your kind words!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Absolutely fabulous, spring and fall are my favorite seasons… spring because I think of it as the season of rebirth, when all the things that died in nature come back to life. The birds are singing the sun is shining again… what a beautiful way to describe it from beginning to end.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you very much for your kind words.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome… just telling the truth.