The Word That I Hate Most

The Word That I Hate Most

A Poem by Anshuman Aryav

There is a question in my mind,

Whose answer I can’t find,

That why my friends, my father and mother,

Compare me to others?

Why they tell me to see those?

Comparing is the word that I hate most.

There are some differences,

That makes me unique and beautiful,

But they compare me everywhere,

Whether it is home or my school.

Comparing is a battle that I can never win,

And if someone compares me this is like a sin.

I will feel very happy that day,

When someone compares me to the person from yesterday....


© 2017 Anshuman Aryav



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Wow! This one gives so much to think about1
Truly said : )

Posted 1 Month Ago


Anshuman Aryav

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much friend..
All is right but at the end to which person from yesterday did you say to compare? Plz tell.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Anshuman Aryav

2 Months Ago

YES..I want someone compare me to that person I was yesterday..
Sakshi

2 Months Ago

Ok.. Thn it's Gd.. 😊😊
Your wisdom is beyond yourself. So you need to compare yourself to only you. Do not agree to anyone until it agrees with your soul, no matter whoever they are.

Posted 2 Months Ago


That's the reality...almost everybody's parents compare them with the other children...even i hate that...apart from that poem is superb.
well done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Anshuman Aryav

3 Months Ago

Thanks dear..
Priyanshi

3 Months Ago

My pleasure
This is out of your experience ey? I believe you are not alone hehe though I find this necessary in life's growth somehow. Being compared to others gives you the ability to be aware by your actions and convert them into your own advantage so that you could be compared as you being the good model. Like what you have penned on the last line. Keep writing. :)

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

Posted 4 Months Ago


Anshuman Aryav

4 Months Ago

thanks for your suggestion
I hate when I am compared to others as each one of us have a different identity and personality....

Specially sharma ji ka beta and beti stuff :D
Well,
Lovely poem!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Anshuman Aryav

4 Months Ago

thank you so much..
this is just so relatable....i really hate it when we are compared with others...that's so wierd and unwanted actually....last lines i greatly agree to...keep goin!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Anshuman Aryav

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much
I can absolutely relate to this masterpiece! Such a creative poem and indeed a thought provoking one.
The last two lines resonate well and the rhyme scheme is marvelous!
I am looking forward to reading your works!


Posted 7 Months Ago


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Anshuman Aryav

6 Months Ago

Thank you Sonakshi from the core of my heart... I am working on my next creation #when my pen has st.. read more
Well said if everyone started comparing each other than no body will be super

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Anshuman Aryav
Anshuman Aryav

Dhanbad, Hinduism, India



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Myself Anshuman from India. I am studying in standard 10th now and am fond of writing poems,article,story and fiction. Now I am 15 years old and am writing from when I was 13. Writing is like an passi.. more..

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