Chale Gaye Wo

Dedicated to my grandpa...

 

Chale gaye wo,

Sab kuch bhula kar,

Chale gaye wo,

Sab ko rulla kar.

Din me kaali raat kar gaye.

Purey ellake me barsat kar gaye,

Hum bhi bas dekhte hi reh gaye,

Dono haath joor kar,

Mutthy me kuch laye the,

Jo chale gaye wo khol kar.

Hastey-hastey ish duniya se,

Wo sare bandhan toor gaye,

Na jaane kyu kaali raato me,

Hume aakela chor gaye.

Chik-chik kar,

Ro-ro kar aab,

Aashoon bhi humse ruth gayi,

Na jaane kab pakri ungli,

Na jaane kab chutt gayi..

Na jaane kab pakri ungli,

Na jaane kab chutt gayi..

Reviews

[Jaskaran Singh Sethi]

Salaam aspKo mera.you have written your own success story and destiny. you are a great poet in the making.Hats off to you for penning such a beautiful poem

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An old hand leads a small hand towards the success but this glory hasn't got any meaning if the old hand unties and leaves the small one all alone.......
Granpa, yeh bolna mere kismat mein hi nahi hua jabki woh pehle hi chale gaye........
But tears comes at that time when elder brothers talk about him.
Tumhare dadaji shayed tumhe chorke nai jana chate the par unhe bhi toh duniya ka reet nibhana tha, tumhe bhi nibhana hoga aur hum sabko bhi........

[Anjali]

wow... so deep and profound... it's so beautiful, you've written your feelings down on a paper and this magical piece of art is present in front of us. hope you are ok with whatever you're dealing with...

[Anshuman Aryav]

Yeah I am okay.....
Thank you so much for your kind review....

[Anjali]

You're welcome!

[Anjali]

Adhbhut. Your poem made me emotional.

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you so much dear....
I am glad that you liked it..

[Najam Us Saher]

I can feel the sadness in this poem. Very emotional.
Is everything okay?

[Anshuman Aryav]

No....we have lost him.....Aab wo humare bech nhi rahe..

[Najam Us Saher]

I am sorry to know about your loss. May God guide you and give you comfort.

[Raj Sahu]

Bahut umda prayas! Apni bhavnao ki abhivakti aapne sundar tarike se ki!

'Chale gaye wo,

Sab kuch bhula kar,

Chale gaye wo,

Sab ko rulla kar.

Din me kaali raat kar gaye.

Purey ellake me barsat kar gaye,

Hum bhi bas dekhte hi reh gaye"

[Anshuman Aryav]

Bahut bahut sukriya aapka