No More (Song with Video)

Hey, you!

Who are you?

Why are you here in my front door?

What's with

the roses

scattered all over my floor?

Chocolates,

apologies...

I honestly have not expected this.

You say

you are

so sorry for all things you did.

You'd like

to take back

all the stupid words you said.

You want

another try.

This time there'd be no more good-bye.

You have your hopes up hi--gh...

And I slowly watch them di--e...

As I say

*Chorus*

Go away!

And take your empty promises with you.

Stay away!

I know your lies and schemes more than you do.

You might think I'm still in love with you like I was before.

You know, I've moved on long ago.

And I love you no more.

(No more, no more)

I love you no more.

(No more, no more)

Did you

expect me

to save our love before it ends?

That night

when you

said we're better off as friends?

Now why

are you

suddenly changing your mind? Yeah.

Are you

now tired

playing games with your exes?

Am I

the next

in line for another yes?

You know

I'm not

just like the rest of them. Yeah.

I remember all back then.

I won't let it happen again.

Now hear me say...

(Repeat Chorus)

Then I

watched you

go right out of my sight

I hoped

you knew

the things I said weren't right.

I ran to my room

and flooded my pillo--oh-oh-ow

'Cause I

didn't mean

a single word that I said

Now it's

too late.

Hate my stupid little head.

'Cause when I told you to go away,

what I meant is

STAY...

But you

went away...

and took your pretty promises with you...

Author's Note

What do you think of the song? And does anybody know the guitar chords of this? I'd really like this to have a background music.

One more thing, I apologize for the video. Obviously, there was a mistake while I was filming it. Haha. Thank you.

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Reminds me of my past relationship with my ex-husband. He never understands the word--NO!

You got it right with your words in this one.

Good luck putting it to music with a guitar.

[Derek Smith]

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing it. I like it a lot

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Derek!

[Derek Smith]

No problem. You're welcome

[Rob Ert]

I could have played the guitar for this song haha, and the chicken would play the drums....Very Original actually. It's funny too. I like it. Rock out : )

[Blue]

Do you have chords for this, Rob? I would love to hear it!

[CoraZanini]

you made my day!
and the poem is very well written!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I'm glad I made someone's day. :) Thanks and merry Christmas! :)

[ASPAR (A Sol Poet Arnay..]

A an interesting song its was cute... Love the poem too thanks for sharing :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thank you so much and merry Christmas to you. :)

[ASPAR (A Sol Poet Arnay Rumens)]

Merry Christmas ear lady :)

[Mike Emil]

promises are thin as paper
take not gifts
take only truth
HAI!!!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I'll try, Mike. :) Merry Christmas!

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

nice try with the video...quite cute actually...and the poem of course sounded entirely different once you put it into the song...overall...it brought a smile to my face...and I am still smiling as I type these words...keep up the free spirit!

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thanks a lot! And merry Christmas! :)

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

merry christmas

[David]

This is awesome :p loved the video it's actually exactly how I heard it in my head as I read the words so I was very surprised when I heard it voiced, and very well might I add lol message me when you read this I'd like to talk to you about something hope to hear from you :) great job kido

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thanks, Ryan! :) It's always a delight to know your thoughts. :)

[David]

You're welcome lol

[Tom C]

Remindes of some of the relationships I have had. It was so good when it was over and they just left me a lone.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

That's so brave of you to say that "it was so good when it was over". I know lots of people who still can't get over a break up. Thank you, Tom. :)