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I look at the Mirror

I look at the Mirror

A Poem by Azure Montessa (Blue)
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I see her...

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I look at the mirror and there I see
a very young woman smiling back at me.
With dark brown eyes, mysterious and deep,
she hides her monsters with secrets to keep.

I look at the mirror and there I see
the flaws on her face in morbid scrutiny.
She believes her lie--she's nothing but a beast,
with her heart intact to stay human at least.

I look at the mirror and there I see
someone with a name but without identity.
She used to be sure, now she's lost in her way
with nowhere to go, not even a place to stay.

I look at the mirror and there I see
the greatest of failures in world history.
With sins and mistakes all piled up so high
will one fervent prayer grant her mercy to die?

I look at the mirror and there I see
a shattered soul in poignant poetry.
Adorned with applause, hailed as divine
I pity the girl in her miserable shrine.

© 2013 Azure Montessa (Blue)



Author's Note

Azure Montessa (Blue)
Photo credit: Google images.

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This is amazing, truly wonderful kido :P ps sorry we haven't talked in awhile I've had a lot going on

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

It's okay. I have been busy, too. Thank you for dropping by, Ryan.
David Burke

4 Years Ago

anytime :)
well done write...sad subjection though...u kids have yer whole lives ahead of u and yet u express only sorrow...think on that

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Youth. Haha. Thank you, Gombeggar.
A great reflection on the self ... can I get that mirror somewhere ... JC Penney?

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Thank you but I wish you won't have access to such mirror, Dayran.
This is definitely how we usually see ourselves. It's very well written anyway!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

I'm glad you can relate to the piece. Thank you, Prime.
Prime

4 Years Ago

Welcome !
^^
Love this poem and the rhyming ! I relate to this poem a lot . Very well written. Good job !

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Sarah.
Your creativity and talent shines in this well written emotional piece.

:) Julie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Julie.
This is the perfect description of how some people see themselves. What we see in the mirror can sometimes be so different from who we are. Great job! :)

~Nox


Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

True. Thank you for pointing that out, Alanna.
I can relate with this well written piece. The secrecy, identity crisis. It's like one of those poems I wish I would have written but couldn't find the right words but you couldn't have written it any better. Keep it up

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

I'm honored. Thank you, Aziz.
I just adore the vocab in this piece, job well done :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Zaney.
zaneybear

4 Years Ago

you are very welcome and deserve every bit of praise you recieve and you should be recieving more fo.. read more
Bluest Blue

4 Years Ago

Says some other writers here as well. But I wonder...

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Added on December 27, 2013
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