Hey, heartbreaker!

Hey, heartbreaker,

thank you for your attention.

I must have been the loveliest

in the entire population

that you chose to practice

your mastered art on me.

Flirtation 101:

Topic? Treachery.

 

Thank you for your flatteries.

It’s so generous of you

to exaggerate my beauty,

tell me, what else is new?

Drop the lousy lines

a lover has to tell.

In case you haven’t heard,

liars rot in hell.

 

Thank you for your poems,

I said I like them so.

But honey, I was joking.

Did you not even know?

Careless comma splices

and awful spelling errors.

Why are you even one

of world’s published authors?

 

Hey, heartbreaker,

thank you for your lies.

You are a living proof

that devils do disguise.

I could have kicked your balls

to deprive you pleasures in bed.

But see, I’ve always cared for you

so I wrote this poem instead.

Author's Note

*Can't find a good picture of a girl with her head held high in triumph so I used mine. Haha. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviews

[Gabby The GAB]

Wow, this is amazing indeed. very much straight-forward and imperfection is greatly appreciated. Great write!

[MBUYISA]

Thanks for blessing us with this amazing poem. It reminds me of my "Never trust a poet" poem. I'd rather receive a poem like this than being kicked on my balls.

Thanks again for sharing Blue.

[Perkele.7885]

Anything you might say is preferable to a kick in the balls. I am telling you girl that I have been down that road b4!
Oh No, not again!
How about I just tell the truth as I might see it? Cute pic! Honestly! And a nice poem to boot!

[Gregory Stires]

Very good poem.i can feel the passion you put into the poem.also it shows how there are people who act like they love or are friends with you but they speak with a forked tongue and only use people.i like the word you used to compare him to a person who seems like they care but is actually the devil in disguise.

[Blue]

Thanks, Gregory. :) This is my new account, by the way. I messed up my old one. :)

[lovergirl]

hooo , good job girl !! you killed it Bravo , hope he deserve these words 'cause they sure are sharp ;) lol

[Blue]

Haha, thank you so much!

[Frieda P]

Wooo, snarky and cutting read, you tell em girl! Muchly enjoyed. ;-)

[Blue]

Thank you so much, Frieda!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha! You're funny here, sis, but I admire how strong you are to say those words to that man who was the apple of your eyes just "yesterday". LOL

I will be honest to you here and I hope you'll understand what I mean. I always want to give these words which I have taken from other concerned citizens here when I was new here like you.

Defense mechanism as I see it - sour grapes. What else would one do but to stand with her head held high? But one thing you should bear in mind was that it's not only one's fault here. You allowed him to enter into your world.

"Thank you for your poems,
I said I like them so.
But honey, I was joking.
Did you not even know?
Careless comma splices
and awful spelling errors.
Why are you even one
of world’s published authors?"

You also played here, aren't you?
You both played the game, my dear, so don't get mad. LOL


But I do hope he'll read this and strike him straight to the heart. I hate men like that. Women must be respected.

You will discover more things in this "ocean" as you sail...

[Blue]

You always see right through me, Ate. Impressive.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Because I'm your sis and somehow we're the sam. LOL. We may never get in touch that often, but I do check you though I don't leave any note or comment. I just want you to enjoy your exploration in this new world. I have that trust on you - you can easily adjust because you're a smart young lady. Baka sabihin mo pa kasi...pakialamera talaga 'to si ate. Hehe.
Happy writing!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

...we're the *same

[Blue]

Not at all. I find it absolutely endearing to have that sister intervention. Haha.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

.....lol :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Very fluid write with good rhyming and great vitriol. The last stanza brought a lighter feel to this and made me smile.

[Blue]

Thanks, John.

[Cassie]

Wow!!!! this one rocks it, all heartbreakers should be given this one, its funny yet straight to the message....happy new year if we dont talk before then, looking ahead for a better year and for more lovely poems from you...

[Blue]

Thanks, Cassie. You rock.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love this :P
It was strong in a way, and confident.
It sent out a great powerful message :)
Great write hun :)

[Blue]

Thanks, Cimmy.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome hun :)