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Like An Angel (Song with Video)

Like An Angel (Song with Video)

A Poem by Azure Montessa (Blue)
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Sorry for the video quality.

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You don't know me but I
know things about you
I don't know how and why
I'm captivated by  you
I love your messed up hair
I love when you don't care
I wonder if you knew
I love it, boy, when you

Smile
Like an angel
and you
Glow
Like an angel
Boy, stay the same
I don't know your name
But well,
You're like an angel

Been watching you for so long
Asking myself if you're real
Think I'd write  you a song
To tell you how I feel
I love your dark brown eyes
I think I see you in the skies
I wonder if you knew
I love it, boy, when you

Smile
Like an angel
and you
Glow
Like an angel
Boy, stay the same
I don't know your name
But well,
You're like an angel

Don't fly away (Like an angel)
Forever stay (Like an angel)
Boy, you're like an angel...

© 2013 Azure Montessa (Blue)



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Azure Montessa (Blue)

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Very charming, Blue. I watched your video and your poem came alive when you sang it. I'm certain that boy would be charmed, too. I hope one day he sees you singing this song and gives you a call! (Just be careful that he really is an angel - looks can be deceiving and you're very young . . .)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the compliment and for the helpful advice, Joyce. I no longer see him in our parish, thou.. read more
Blue, you really have a nice voice -- singing and speaking-- and your song is quite charming. I suspect that the young man in your parish that is the subject of your song would be extremely flattered by hearing it, especially coming from you.

You do indeed have some talent and a lot of charisma as well, so keep using it and you will very likely go far.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Eddie, you're giving me credits less than I deserve. Or maybe it is I who sells myself short? Thank .. read more
Eddie Davis

3 Years Ago

Never sell yourself short, or be ashamed or embarrassed of who you are. Take pride in yourself!
V V nice indeed, you got some talent, keep going ..............and keep us posted

Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Thanks. This is my new account, anyway.
A very brave attempt at putting yourself up there. It has the feel of a modern 'girl band' piece. I used to write lyrics and think they are a connected genre but different enough to keep in separate drawers. Saying that I wrote a rap a couple of years ago.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Blue

3 Years Ago

Thanks, John. This is my new account anyway. How are you?

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